My narrative

One spooky dark and stormy night I went as frankenstein so I got me a big bag to put my lollies in so I went to my first house it looked very spooky it was covered with spider webs and scary pumpkins in the front. While I was walking I met a few friends I met Tai the noisy ghost and Riley the clown and Abdurraham the little mouse but Riley was the scariest he was so freaky I couldn’t stop thinking about him he was so scary it was  like he was  my worse nightmare When I stopped at this house it looked old and very scary it looked like a ghost was living there then Abdurraham got very scared .

I used lots of adjectives so my narrative was good.I liked how I used adjectives.Please make a comment on my blog.

My narrative story By Gozan

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PLease listen to my story about going fishing with daand please make a comment.

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The Tamaki area

The Tamaki area goes from Point England to Mt Wellington down to panmure and along the Tamaki River.I live in pakuranga which the Tamaki River joins to.

How the Tamaki River is used

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We made the voice thread with mrs Miller and mrs Paton. We took our photos and found information about tamaki river and later it was recorded individually.
Please listen to my comment about how people used Tamaki river now.