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Friday, 25 October 2013

My narrative


One spooky dark and stormy night I went as frankenstein so I got me a big bag to put my lollies in so I went to my first house it looked very spooky it was covered with spider webs and scary pumpkins in the front. While I was walking I met a few friends I met Tai the noisy ghost and Riley the clown and Abdurraham the little mouse but Riley was the scariest he was so freaky I couldn’t stop thinking about him he was so scary it was  like he was  my worse nightmare When I stopped at this house it looked old and very scary it looked like a ghost was living there then Abdurraham got very scared .

I used lots of adjectives so my narrative was good.I liked how I used adjectives.Please make a comment on my blog.

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