This blog is a record of my learning from Panmure Bridge Primary School through to Tamaki College.
I like how you were writing a sentence about your uncle because of the colour and the picture well done Gozan I really like it.
Hi Gozan i really like how you write about Amanaki lei lei also i like the colours keep it up.
Hey Gozan,I liked how you wrote about your uncle and described him a lot. I think you could work on some of your sentences though. Besides that keep up the great work!
I really like how you described your uncle. He sounds so great. Keep it up!
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I like how you were writing a sentence about your uncle because of the colour and the picture well done Gozan I really like it.
Hi Gozan i really like how you write about Amanaki lei lei also i like the colours keep it up.
Hey Gozan,
I liked how you wrote about your uncle and described him a lot. I think you could work on some of your sentences though. Besides that keep up the great work!
I really like how you described your uncle. He sounds so great. Keep it up!
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