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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, 4 May 2016

Dog Report

Dogs are one of my favourite animals They can be your best friends.I think dogs can be a lot of fun.There are a lot of different kinds of dogs. But they all need food, special equipment, and care.

There are lots of different kinds of dogs. Dogs come in all sorts of different breeds, some dogs are mixed breeds. Some of the most well known breeds are: German Shepherd, Poodle, Spaniel, Labrador, and Boxer. Sometimes mixed breeds have some funny names. For example if you cross a labrador and a poodle you have a labradoodle.

Dogs need a lot of food, they can have two meals a day or some dogs have one meal a day. Dogs also eat weird things like jelly meat. Dogs need lots of nutritious food. They also need lots of water to keep them healthy.

Dogs need a water bowl for their water. Dogs need lots of dog toys their favourite toys are tiny tennis balls. They also need a dog house. A collar and leash means you can walk your dog. Dogs are very active they like to go for long walks or runs.

When they are hurt you should take them to the vet. When they are puppies keep them inside the house because it might get lost or get bullied by bigger dogs. When they are old enough let them outside.

In conclusion, dogs are one of my favourite animals They can be your best friend. I think dogs can be a lot of fun. There are a lot of different kinds of dogs. Dogs can be a man’s best friend.

This week for writing we were writing fiction stories about dogs.And we gathered all our information and put it in a sentence.

Thursday, 14 April 2016

Anzac Letter


This is my Anzac letter.We were learning to understand what the soldiers of ww1 would have seen and wrote letters about how we thought the soldiers would have felt about what they saw.

Tuesday, 1 March 2016

Draft sentences

LI: To write a stretched sentence
LI: To Use DRAFT to check our sentences.

Who: Jonny

What: Jonny ran

When: As night fell Jonny ran

Where: As night fell Jonny ran in the streets

Why: As night fell Johnny ran in the streets because he was chased down the road by two motorbike riders.


DRAFT version
As night fell, Johnny ran down the street as he was getting chased by two angry motorbike riders.

Thursday, 2 April 2015

Through the door

I was so nervous and excited at the same time am I at the right house as i said in my head. Couldn't wait to see my new room. So suddenly I turned the door handle and went in through the doors. I was so nervous.

Today our teacher put us into buddys and we had to read each other writing.Then we had to comment on their writing.Then we had to tell them what to fix up and what they did that was good.

Tuesday, 3 February 2015

Confidence

This is my Y chart that I did about confidence.I had to write what confidence feels like, looks like and sounds like.

Monday, 17 November 2014

Questions to astronauts

Questions  to an astronauts

  • How do you guys sleep in space. we have a special space to sleep it is like a sleeping bag
  • does the food in space taste the same as it does on earth.The food that we eat taste different we don’t eat our food on plates we eat it in containers
  • How do you guys wash your face. we squeeze out a little blob of water and splash it on your face.
  • How do you eat your food. Their is special astronaut food that we eat the hot chocolate doesn't come in a cup it come in a container
is it hard to do things in space.a little bit I can’t even walk properly
eat in space
  • have you been on any planet besides Earth.No we haven't we just stay in our space shuttle and do our jobs.

This is how you sleep in space when you sleep you can relax your arms and they will float.

Friday, 11 April 2014

My simile poem

I am as fast as a jaguar running after his lunch.
I am as strong as a hippo trying to get out of the mud.
I am as sweet as a juicy ice block melting on your tongue.
I am as busy as male lions hunting for their food.
I am as large as a truck passing in the motorway.
I am as loud as a tiger roaring to scare the animals away.
I am as cheeky as a monkey squeaking at people.
Put it all together,

and you’ve got Gozan

Thursday, 3 April 2014

How to annoy your teacher

How to annoy your teacher
  • Stomp your feet on the mat while the teacher is talking.
  • Make squeaking noises when the teacher is talking.
  • Stand on your head while the teacher is sharing information.
  • sleeping on the mat while the teacher is talking.
  • Shout out on the mat while the teacher is reading a book.
  • whistling when your teacher is talking.
  • last step get ready to get in trouble.




         yesterday we were writing about how to annoy your teacher.We had to write how to annoy your teacher on the mat.We had to use bossy verbs.Can you think of another way to annoy your teacher.

Monday, 24 March 2014

What if bees were the size of a cat

         What if bees were as big as cats
  • If bees were the size of a cat I would never want to play outside because  the bees might sting us.


  • If bees were the size of  a cat the bees would be chasing us everywhere.


  • If bees were the size of a cat they will look scary and sting us very hard and we will need to go to the hospital.


  • You would have to close your windows and you would need to close the door every time.


  • You are not allowed to play outside or they will sting you.


  • If you are going to the car you might want to watch out because you might get stinged.

  • Bees are going to grow bigger and bigger and they will get scarier and scarier.

Wednesday, 26 February 2014

previously


Previously I was sitting on the mat with room five.  Previously I was reading a book about previously.  Previously I was walking to school  with a  with a gigantic dragon and everyone was scared and ran away all the cars were beeping at my dragon then my dragon blew fire at the cars.  Previously  I was getting dressed with a dragon.  Previously I tickled my dragon and it blew fire and made me some burnt toast.

Monday, 10 February 2014

Living in a castle

I would like to live in a castle because you get to sleep in big beds. Sometimes if you are to lazy to cook your servants will cook for you. You get to have a swimming pool in your castle and you can have a game room with lots of games like a pool table Xbox PlayStation and you can also have a music room with lots of my favorite music and I want to have a movie room and a bowling room.I can also have a massaging room for me if I have sore bones.

Thursday, 28 November 2013

Tamaki river walk


Tamaki river walk
This is my animoto video about Tamaki River walk around the Tamaki River walk way.